Coordinated Effort Achieves Perfect Stillness Across All Levels
By Tom Seest
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Town Waiting on State, State Waiting on County, County Waiting on Town
Act I – The Porch Where It Began
Boot Barnes sat on the wide front porch of the Dunlap Feed & Supply, rocking gently in a chair that had long since memorized his shape. The morning air was thick with that kind of stillness that suggested something important might happen—or more likely, wouldn’t.
Clovis Strickland stood beside him with a clipboard, two pencils tucked behind his ear, and an expression that suggested he had already solved the problem nobody had yet agreed existed.
“You see,” Clovis said, tapping the paper, “the issue ain’t that nobody wants to act.”
Boot squinted at him. “Then what is it?”
“It’s coordination,” Clovis replied. “Proper sequencing of responsibility.”
Boot leaned forward. “Sequencing of what now?”
Clovis flipped the clipboard around. It revealed a hand-drawn diagram of arrows, boxes, circles, and one square that appeared to be labeled twice.
“This here’s the flow of authority,” Clovis explained. “Town waits on county. County waits on state. State waits on confirmation from the county, which in turn requires input from the town.”
Boot stared at it for a long moment.
“That looks like a snake eatin’ its own tail,” he said.
Clovis nodded. “Exactly. That’s what makes it stable.”
Mabel Dean Ashcroft emerged from the store holding a sack of feed and a suspicion she had carried her entire life.
“What y’all lookin’ at?” she asked.
Clovis held up the chart proudly. “A system of shared responsibility.”
Mabel peered at it, then shook her head slowly.
“It goes in circles,” she said.
Clovis smiled. “That’s what I just said.”
“No,” Mabel replied, handing Boot the sack. “You said it like it was a good thing.”

Act I – The Porch Where It Began
Act II – Town Hall Confirms Its Position
Inside Town Hall, the air carried the quiet authority of papers that had been signed but not read.
Shelley Fawn Wexler stood at the front of the room, hands clasped as if holding the concept of progress between them.
“We are prepared to act,” she said.
Maggie Sue Dillard raised a hand. “On what?”
Shelley paused. “On the matter currently under consideration.”
Trixie Jo Bartlett leaned back in her chair. “Which is?”
Shelley glanced at a folder. “Pending clarification from the county.”
Tiffany Annette Roark nodded thoughtfully. “So we’re waiting.”
Shelley straightened. “We are not waiting. We are positioned.”
“Positioned where?” Trixie asked.
Shelley hesitated. “At the point of readiness.”
Mister Wade Langston cleared his throat. “And what happens when the county responds?”
“We proceed,” Shelley said.
“And if they don’t?”
Shelley looked toward the window, as if expecting the answer to arrive on a breeze.
“Then we maintain readiness.”
From the back of the room, Clovis raised his hand.
“I’ve diagrammed the dependencies,” he offered.
Shelley sighed. “Of course you have.”
He pinned the flowchart to the wall. The room grew quiet.
“It goes in circles,” Maggie Sue said.
“Yes,” Clovis replied. “That’s how you know it’s complete.”

Act II – Town Hall Confirms Its Position
Act III – The County Reviews the Situation
At the county office, Evelyn Grace Tipton sat with a stack of documents that had the distinct weight of importance without the inconvenience of urgency.
“We’ve received the town’s position,” she said.
Lurleen Davenport adjusted her glasses. “And what is their position?”
“That they are ready,” Evelyn replied.
“For what?” Lurleen asked.
Evelyn flipped a page. “For action contingent upon county guidance.”
Lurleen leaned back. “So they’re waiting on us.”
“Yes,” Evelyn said.
“And we are waiting on the state.”
Evelyn nodded.
Chester Ray Blevins, who had come in to deliver printed materials no one had requested yet somehow needed, spoke up.
“Sounds efficient,” he said.
Lurleen gave him a look. “It is coordinated.”
Evelyn tapped her pen. “We cannot proceed until the state clarifies jurisdiction.”
“And the state,” Lurleen said slowly, “is waiting on input from us.”
Evelyn smiled faintly. “That is correct.”
They both sat with that for a moment.
“So,” Chester Ray said, “nobody’s doing anything.”
Evelyn shook her head. “Everyone is doing their part.”

Act III – The County Reviews the Situation
Act IV – The State Acknowledges Receipt
In an office several layers removed from urgency, Dr. Neil Cowgill stood near a window overlooking a view that suggested distance more than perspective.
“We have received the county’s inquiry,” he said.
Coach Freddie Stubblefield, who had been invited for reasons no one could quite articulate, nodded.
“And what do they need?” Coach asked.
Dr. Cowgill adjusted his glasses. “Clarification.”
“On what?”
“The extent of their authority.”
Coach crossed his arms. “And whose job is it to clarify that?”
Dr. Cowgill paused. “The county’s, technically.”
Coach let out a slow breath. “So they’re asking you to tell them what they already have the authority to decide.”
“That is one interpretation,” Dr. Cowgill said.
“And what’s yours?”
“That we should wait for their formal determination before responding.”
Coach stared at him.
“That’s a loop,” he said.
Dr. Cowgill smiled politely. “It is a process.”

Act IV – The State Acknowledges Receipt
Act V – The Diner Observes the Pattern
At the diner, Sonny Morales poured coffee with the steady rhythm of someone who had seen patterns repeat themselves long before they were documented.
“They’re all waitin’,” he said.
RT Mullins nodded. “Town waits on county, county waits on state, state waits on county, county waits on town.”
Sonny shrugged. “That’s a circle.”
Daisy the hound wandered through the door, nose low, tail steady.
Behind her came a goat.
Nobody reacted immediately.
Trixie Jo looked up from her plate. “That goat belong to anybody?”
Boot glanced over. “Not officially.”
The goat walked past every table, unbothered by jurisdiction.
“Notice somethin’?” Sonny said.
RT leaned forward. “It ain’t waitin’.”
Daisy followed the goat, as if recognizing a freedom she had once known but forgotten under paperwork.

Act V – The Diner Observes the Pattern
Act VI – The Church Calls for Patience
Pastor Arnold Peeler stood at the pulpit, hands resting gently as if holding the weight of time itself.
“Patience,” he said, “is not inaction. It is faith in the process.”
Sister Lila Mae “Hallelujah” Pruitt raised both hands. “Amen to the process!”
Boot shifted in the pew. “How long we supposed to have faith in it?”
Pastor Peeler smiled calmly. “Until clarity arrives.”
Mabel leaned over to Evelyn. “Clarity ain’t coming. It’s lost.”
Evelyn whispered back, “It’s pending.”
From the aisle, the goat wandered in, Daisy at her side.
Sister Lila Mae pointed. “Even the creatures of the earth come to witness!”
The goat stopped in the center, looked around, and then continued walking.
Unbothered.
Unassigned.

Act VI – The Church Calls for Patience
Act VII – The Sheriff’s Office Confirms Neutrality
Sheriff Peeler leaned back in his chair while Officer Kenny Joe Teeter stood beside a chalkboard filled with arrows that looked suspiciously like Clovis’s diagram.
“We’ve reviewed the situation,” the sheriff said.
“And?” Kenny Joe asked.
“We are prepared to act,” Sheriff Peeler replied.
“On what?”
“Upon instruction.”
Kenny Joe nodded slowly. “From who?”
“The appropriate authority.”
“And who’s that?”
The sheriff paused.
“That’s under review.”
Doug “Doughboy” Teeter leaned against the wall. “So we’re waitin’ too.”
The sheriff folded his hands. “We are maintaining readiness.”
Kenny Joe looked out the window.
The goat crossed the street.
Daisy followed.
“They ain’t maintainin’ nothin’,” he said.

Act VII – The Sheriff’s Office Confirms Neutrality
Act VIII – The Porch Reaches a Conclusion
Back on the porch, the diagram had grown.
Clovis had added new arrows.
Some now pointed back to themselves.
Boot stared at it.
“Where does it start?” he asked.
Clovis tapped the center.
“It doesn’t,” he said. “That’s the beauty of it.”
Mabel shook her head. “That ain’t beauty. That’s stuck.”
Shelley arrived, followed by Maggie Sue, Trixie Jo, and half the town.
“We’ve all agreed,” Shelley announced.
“On what?” Boot asked.
“That we are waiting on the appropriate authority.”
Boot looked around.
“Which one’s that?”
Everyone paused.
Clovis consulted the chart.
“It depends,” he said.

Act VIII – The Porch Reaches a Conclusion
Act IX – Perfect Stillness Achieved
The town, the county, and the state each confirmed their positions.
Each was ready.
Each was waiting.
Each was certain that action would occur as soon as the proper sequence aligned.
And so nothing moved.
Except the goat.
It wandered freely between Town Hall, the county office, the church, and the diner.
Daisy followed faithfully.
No one stopped them.
No one assigned them.
No one claimed responsibility.
Boot watched them pass.
“Well,” he said, “somebody’s movin’.”
Clovis nodded.
“Yes,” he said. “But not within the system.”

Act IX – Perfect Stillness Achieved
Epilogue – The Question Remains
The diagram stayed on the porch.
It grew slightly more complicated each day.
Arrows refined.
Boxes clarified.
Responsibility shared more precisely than ever before.
And still—
Nothing happened.
Boot leaned back in his chair.
“So who starts?” he asked again.
No one answered.
Because the answer had already been assigned.
To someone else.

Epilogue – The Question Remains
Disclaimer
No towns were halted in the making of this story.
Any resemblance to real systems, structures, or endlessly looping chains of responsibility is purely coincidental—and structurally inevitable.
If you find yourself waiting for action, please remain in a state of readiness.
Clarification is pending.

Disclaimer – Clarification Pending
Real Places Behind the Ruckus – From The Dunlap Directory

Real Places Behind the Ruckus – From The Dunlap Directory
Yes, this story was fictional; even the parts that weren’t true. These places? Absolutely real. Stop by, support local, and keep the Wi-Fi away from livestock:
- Chester Frost Park
- Jim Garren – State Farm Insurance Agent
- Rosewood Farm Weddings & Events Venue
- Booker T. Washington State Park
- Everlee & Co Construction
- First Farmers And Commercial Bank
- Mountain View Barns of Dunlap
- Reed Electric
- Unlocking Potential Educational Services
- MaKyla-Kai Photography
- Discount Metal Roofing
- Savage Gulf State Park
- Coldwell Banker Pryor Realty Inc.
- Hampton Inn Chattanooga/Hixson
- Marion County Park
- TrueBlade Mowing
- Law Office of Samuel F. Hudson
- HumBug Pest Control
- FedEx OnSite At Walgreens

Real Places Behind the Ruckus – From The Dunlap Directory
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